wasted hope

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  • Lost Love

    Poem Commentary

    i wrote this along with many others after i came back from a family vacation of 2 weeks, and my ex had already moved on even though we were still together.

    wasted hope

    i had hope for you,
    but you lost it.
    i waited for you,
    but you took too long.
    i waited for your call,
    but you never did.
    now the only thing left for you,
    is all my wasted hope.

    you said you'd call,
    but you never did.
    you raised my hope,
    and with no connection.
    you crushed it.
    now i've wasted all my hope for you,
    guess it's over or never was.
    so here's my last present for you,
    here's all my wasted hope.

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    Qualin commented on wasted hope

    07-22-2009

    TWLIGHT THIS IS GOOD FOR YOU AGE VERY ADULT THINKING..SO DONT BOTHER WITH LOOSERS THERE'S PLENT TIMEY OF TIME ...WORK AT YOUR GIFTS AND YOU'LL BE JUST FINE..BEEN THERE AND DONE THAT I CAN SADLY SAY I LEFT A LOVER...I JUST WENT AWAY..BUT THERE CAME THE TIME WHEN I REALISED..THERE WASN'T ANOTHER TO TAKE HER PLACE..WE ALL MAKE BIG MISTAKES IM GUILTY ..I HOPE IT'S THE LAST..PLEASE READ MY POEMS THEN YOU MAY SEE...A FRIEND I HOPE...QUALIN

    freind commented on wasted hope

    07-11-2009

    very nice for a young lady .you got many years ahead of you. thi is agood piece. keep up the good work

    twilightchick

    07/14/2009

    thank you

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