Wasted
Wasted space
Wasted life
Wasted hope
Beautiful knife
Wasted words
Wasted mind
Wasted time
Nothing to find
Wasted day
Wasted night
Wasted week
All in fright
Wasted months
Wasted years
Wasted life
All in tears
Wasted
7 Comments
Tags: Sadness
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DirtyLilSecret commented on Wasted
06-02-2009
- This is so true.. Good flow and rythem.. I couldnt write like this and it is something i would love to do.. keep up the good work!
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06-01-2009
- Kim, I really liked this one a lot. I love poems like this. Short and sweet, yet full of meaning. I like the use of the word wasted and the little breaks. It's almost a little frightening. I hope you weren't in a bad state when you wrote this. It really makes me think. Read my poems Wish I Did and Bouquet. I think you'll see some similarity. I would like to know what you think. You are a good writer Kim. Keep 'em coming. K
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DragonAngel commented on Wasted
06-01-2009
- wow soo kool nice on the rhymin and so deep I like this one It grabs ya and makes ya feel it....................
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Indigogreen16 commented on Wasted
06-01-2009
- beautifully written, i like the rhythm of it........................................................
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