Wasted

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  • Sadness

    Wasted

    Wasted space
    Wasted life
    Wasted hope
    Beautiful knife
    Wasted words
    Wasted mind
    Wasted time
    Nothing to find
    Wasted day
    Wasted night
    Wasted week
    All in fright
    Wasted months
    Wasted years
    Wasted life
    All in tears

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    DirtyLilSecret commented on Wasted

    06-02-2009

    This is so true.. Good flow and rythem.. I couldnt write like this and it is something i would love to do.. keep up the good work!

    kmooney commented on Wasted

    06-01-2009

    Kim, I really liked this one a lot. I love poems like this. Short and sweet, yet full of meaning. I like the use of the word wasted and the little breaks. It's almost a little frightening. I hope you weren't in a bad state when you wrote this. It really makes me think. Read my poems Wish I Did and Bouquet. I think you'll see some similarity. I would like to know what you think. You are a good writer Kim. Keep 'em coming. K

    DragonAngel commented on Wasted

    06-01-2009

    wow soo kool nice on the rhymin and so deep I like this one It grabs ya and makes ya feel it....................

    Indigogreen16 commented on Wasted

    06-01-2009

    beautifully written, i like the rhythm of it........................................................

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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