Wasted

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  • Life

    Wasted

    Heart-broken,
    Brain-dead,
    Hateful mind,
    Life wasted
    All there is to a life lived well
    Is
    A flourishing love or complete heart,
    An amount of knowledge unknown to many,
    A grateful mind,
    And a good eye to notice all these things.
    Otherwise,
    You have
    A life wasted.

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    Sydney commented on Wasted

    09-16-2010

    this is beautifully written. youve wrote this with into a painting. Syd

    himekachan111

    09/24/2010

    ty

    ImStillHere commented on Wasted

    09-10-2010

    i love the structure and flow of your words :D you seem to have very good potential. i suggest you ask papapaczki to put some of your poems up :) im absolutly positive he'd help a young poet like urself

    himekachan111

    09/10/2010

    ty :)

    Rygar commented on Wasted

    09-10-2010

    i like! nicely written and sometimes many thoughts and feelings can be shared with very few words... nice job!

    himekachan111

    09/10/2010

    ty :)

    Lillixfan14 commented on Wasted

    09-08-2010

    Well written, derserves a 10! short,mysterious...I LOVE IT!

    himekachan111

    09/08/2010

    ty

    HopeOhlarik commented on Wasted

    09-08-2010

    I see why deep gave this a 10. Good job, see not all simple and small poems are bad.This one is very good.

    himekachan111

    09/08/2010

    ty

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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