Waterfalls

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Waterfalls

Waterfalls,
This water falls from my eyes,
Not the skies,
Flowing freely from the depths of my soul,
Gripping me with grief as my heart gets cold.
You continue to hurt me with said things,
To my heart it clings,
It burns me, 
It turns me,
Into the bitter, cold, unforgiving ME,
You forget we are human with a fleshly hearts,
Throwing words at me like poison darts,
But love wells up inside me, still so strong,
Even though this time you were wrong,
My heart so weak I forgive you,
I release the hurt, the anger too,
As I realize I will always love you,
No matter what you do.
 

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angelchaser commented on Waterfalls

12-10-2010

This is absolutely beautiful and so touching in its pain and passion. beautiful poem.

sweetchinee

12/10/2010

Thanks alot ....

truth917 commented on Waterfalls

11-14-2010

This poems seem to be heart felt by you making the passion felt. Nice write my friend..

sweetchinee

11/15/2010

Thank you T

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Waterfalls

11-14-2010

Words of wisdom from Tempestlady. I agree. These things happen where a person grabs your heart,but you fail to capture theirs. A beautiful, poignant write. I loved it..........E

sweetchinee

11/15/2010

Thanks E ...

Tempestlady commented on Waterfalls

11-14-2010

When your love for someone else begins to change who you are yourself then one must ensure to draw the line to leave, to before love makes you not like yourself. Love should never do that, but enhance and create joy. Very insightful and deep expression. Write on....

sweetchinee

11/15/2010

I agree with that... but it's one thing to leave... but love never leaves u....

Sx9 commented on Waterfalls

11-14-2010

yes waterfall can be what ever you want it to be ,but surely not tears, but since you insist there it is,so ur are crying for lost sould that drip water that make you realize life is complex,yes we can have it akll,,

sweetchinee

11/14/2010

life is truly complexed and not all things can be explained or even understood...

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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