We Are Three

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    • caspiancri
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    We Are Three

    Our time short but rather lovely
    For our memories will live on
    Your eyes are the sweetest
    Your grin is so innocent
    You are the love never forgotten
    And to wonder what if No one had come
    between us
    So lonesome was I, for comfort was hard to find
    For everytime we meet some one always in between
    Would our love still hold true if there were no middle
    We may never know the years have flown, but our memeories are vivid
    Could our love be strong enough to face such time
    It has been sweet to you and for me it has taken its toll
    My heart still beats the same after all these years as you can see, but this could never be cause we are still three.

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    lightcourier commented on We Are Three

    04-05-2009

    nice complexity. I liked the way you presented this idea and your phraseology. Thanks.

    ccslim commented on We Are Three

    03-12-2009

    Dad gum kiddo's hehe really good but alas one misspelled word gets a red mark when it goes beyond you n me! Content awesome!

    dahlusion commented on We Are Three

    03-12-2009

    Lovely, simply lovely!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    caspiancri’s Poems (12)

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    The Wall 9
    Fury Within 3
    Don't Close Your Eyes 12
    Lies 7
    Contemplating 4
    A Celebration 3
    Family Love 4
    We Are Three 3
    Change 3
    I'm Here 5
    Mending 4
    Inspiration 3