We both lost

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    We both lost

    I was yours,
    You were mine,
    There's so much pain I feel inside,
    When these words come to mind,
    They used to speak of what we had,
    But now they are lost in time.

    Destiny decided that we shouldn't be together,
    And the pain that we endured killed our love forever

    We thought it would be better,
    To walk away and not to look back,
    That if we left we could prevent our broken
    hearts from crying more,

    Maybe then a newer love could heal our
    bleeding hearts,

    Maybe then a newer love would knock at our door.

    Today I see the distance start to grow; it's tough
    to cope,
    And now I only keep my sweetest memories and
    my hope.


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    sweetlips commented on We both lost

    05-14-2009

    I like your work

    raggedypoet commented on We both lost

    03-26-2009

    I love the way you write from your heart!! Beautiful poem, so sad but still very pretty and romantic.

    sweetlips commented on We both lost

    03-22-2009

    I LIKE THIS I KNOW WHAT THIS FEELS LIKE WHEN YOU LOVE SOMEONE AND THEY WALK AWAY

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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