we must Be Peace
if we wish for peace,we must Be Peace
we must Be Peace
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Tags: Philosophy , Peace
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harder than it sounds, lol ... but a start ... (c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.comwe must Be Peace
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Olan01 commented on we must Be Peace
11-12-2010
- So be it. I sign off sometimes with love, peace and freedom and that comes deep from my conscious and unconscious mind, for to love is to know peace and both come from freedom of conscious and unconscious thoughts. The world has all types of control mechanisms which are subtle, indoctrinating and teaches us war. If people would follow the only rule given; to treat each other as we would like to be treated, a rule handed down from the beginning of time; we would have no need for governments, religion, armies, guns or any type of control. As you can see this has sparked a deep core in me and look forward toward more of your poems; love, peace and freedom, Olan.
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11/13/2010
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Marsink commented on we must Be Peace
02-14-2010
- For one to dispense peace, it must already reside in the giver: wishing and hoping for it will never be enough, if it is not at it's station, firmly rooted in the soil of love. A desireable prayer supplied
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02/15/2010
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Paolo commented on we must Be Peace
02-10-2010
- In this work we find that the lesson we are to learn is to be peace, the work says this 5 times in a poem with 11 lines. The repetition is a very effective tool to have ones readers to remember the lesson. The primary message is one we would do well to remember. Martin Luther King said, "It is not enough to say we will not wage war; we must love peace more". I agree with you both.
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02/10/2010
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StandingBear commented on we must Be Peace
01-17-2010
- Yes, tell it like it is DancingHawk! "Give Peace A Chance .. circa .. John Lennon" Great!
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01/18/2010
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Charlie23 commented on we must Be Peace
01-12-2010
- Peace to you for your beautiful poem!...........................
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01/12/2010
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