Welcoming The Pain

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    • FLAWLES
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    Thank you for choosing to read this. It is inspired by "The Temptress" by phatdaddee. Please read his poem as well. http://www.originalpoetry.com/poet/phatdaddee

    Welcoming The Pain

    She toys with me, like a cat and mouse, like I’m some play-thing

    My anguish is her aim.  I want love.  She wants, a fling.

    She seems to enjoy my torment.  She gets off on my grief.

    Deriving pleasure from my pain.  I can’t get, no relief.

     

    She teases me so monstrously.  I can’t resist her charms

    Her smile hides her desires, as I leap into her arms.

    The pain that she provokes in me, is self-inflicted I’m sure

    But it can’t compare to the fire, that she uses as a lure.

     

    She strokes my furnace joyfully, to pull juice from my rod

    Using my passion to fan the flames, popping every seed from my pod

    Then extorting me, from her recompense is a reason, she’s never bored

    For playing her little games, to win is her reward

     

    The blood drops are not much to pay, for my quest to win her heart.

    For the pleasure that I have found.  I can’t believe her sweetness is so tart.

    The pain, I feel it physically, from my head to my feet

    Though emotionally joy abounds, that fills my loins with heat

     

    She keeps my heart in darkness so I can’t find my way

    My emotion knows no light.  She’s the hunter.  I’m the prey.

    though she treats me so unkindly, I will forever be her prize

    she’s the source of my delight, and in time, my demise.

     

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    phatdaddee commented on Welcoming The Pain

    03-18-2011

    Good Job dude! Thats really, really good! The poem is excellent but I have to inform you that I am a he not a she! LOL!

    FLAWLES

    03/18/2011

    Ah damn homie! My bad! I tripped; and the bad part is, I was sober! LMMFBAO! I fixed it. I changed the 'her' to 'his'. Anyway, thanx for reading it, glad you liked it and thanx for the compliment.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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