We'll Last

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dedicated to my boyfriend Alex I love you

We'll Last

I know we’ll last.
We’ve been through so much in the past
If something happens to us I would cry
Inside I could probably die
Nothing would be the same
I just might go insane with out u
Baby u know its true
It started in July
And It wont end till the day I die
The memories we share
Just proves how much I care
About our future together
We’re going to last forever
I really think so and I think u should know
How I feel about u and me
U just have to see
That we’re going to make it through this
I miss the days that we weren’t fighting all the time
The days we were doing just fine.
I can already see us holding hands
Walking in the sand watching the sun set
Thinking about the first day we met
Knowing it was the best thing
That ever happened to me
Giving me a meaning to breath
Baby The way I feel about you is true
And will never change
Only if u knew the end is out of our range
The only thing I have left to say
Is at the end of every day
I know that I really truly love you

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angelchaser commented on We'll Last

12-10-2010

My heart breaks for you, Ashley. I hate to see a young girl in pain and the loss of a love you hold dear is one of the greatest pains we can endure. But.......in time........you'll be ok. I know you will, you're a smart girl and you'll get yourself through this. *hugs* Remember, I'm here if you ever want to talk.

AshleyyBabyy

12/11/2010

I really really do miss him.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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