were you waiting for me ?

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    were you waiting for me ?

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    dad, can you see me ?
    dad, can you hear me ?
    it was so loud
    when everything crashed down
    and i got that phone call
    i travelled for six hours that day
    to watch you smile at me one last time
    before you passed away
    you were so sick for so long
    and it was time to go
    but i still need to know
    were you waiting for me ?
















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    Worthless commented on were you waiting for me ?

    07-24-2012

    yup he was.. well written...

    Kingwebstar commented on were you waiting for me ?

    06-02-2012

    Love this poem it is real and from the heart at least you got a chance to meet your dad and say goodbye I never met mine. But stay strong that is what he would have wanted you to do. Love Da KinG

    Crush

    06/23/2012

    Sorry to hear that you never met your dad. Thank you for reading me ?

    cheronld commented on were you waiting for me ?

    04-22-2011

    Now this hit all the love and hurt within me...saying goodbye is never easy...but being able to be there one last time is a gift that is PRICELESS...I missed my chance so I really related to this....a very personal and heartfelt write....Cher

    Crush

    04/23/2011

    thanks, love.

    Sali commented on were you waiting for me ?

    04-21-2011

    I am so sorry for your loss, Please allow me to condole you with these words- Jesus is a father to the father-less. He love you more than anyone else...He knows how you feel.

    Crush

    04/23/2011

    thank you so very much.

    Ninjaboy commented on were you waiting for me ?

    03-01-2011

    this was a great peom, i loved it, im sorry for your loss, it almost made me cry, i too know that feeling, 10

    Crush

    04/20/2011

    thank you.

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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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