What did I do?

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    • jerseycrtz
    • Your the one for me, and I'm the one for you, take the both of us and we're the perfect two. <3

    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this poem about a friendship that was ruined by other people. They think that we like each other when we don't, or at least he doesn't. I kind of did but now I'll never get the chance to talk and be at least friends. Ya, thanks "buddies".

    What did I do?

    I miss the way
    You would laugh and smile with me every day
    I used to adore you so
    And then you had to get up and go
    What did I do?
    Was I mean to you?
    It isn’t my fault they don’t like me
    But that fact you cannot see
    So now I’m lonely and crying too
    Why is it so hard to just like you?

     I miss how you used to tease
    And when you did time would freeze
    It’s kind of pathetic how I memorized your grin
    With your little dimples on your chin
    Sometimes I wonder what I would have to do
    To get you back so I could keep on loving you

     I miss how it used to be so easy
    when the things you did seemed so cheesy
    If only I could rewind time
    And show you that you could be mine
    But then, that was what scared you away
    So please come back and this time stay
     
    I miss the way you tickled me
    And then I would laugh with glee
    Those were the days when I didn’t care
    About what other people thought was there
    They thought that there was something more
    Well I did too but I wasn’t sure
    Now I know that it isn’t true
    But still I keep on Loving you

     I guess I’ll have to wait
    And see if our friendship is through
    But I know one thing for sure
    I really miss you

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    thecross commented on What did I do?

    04-12-2010

    It's tough to lose any kind of relationship especially due to outside influences great emotion in this piece, nice write.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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