What do you care what's wrong with me?

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    What do you care what's wrong with me?

    What do you care what's wrong with me?
    You don't even care enuf to listen to me?
    It's life, bullshit, men and the government that's wrong with me!
    Can't you see? Are you blind?
    Haven't seen all the signs?
    No one to care that I'm losing all my hair...
    All stressed out and
    only I know what about!
    Sad but True,
    There's nothing anyone can do!
    I'm still here all alone,
    No hope for a life, a job,
    a phone or a home!
    Just me and the Lord and 
    explaining all this unjustice
    just makes me angry and bored!
    So what do care what's wrong with me?
    I've gave you words, signs, and feelings,
    And all you do is keep stealing,
    All my thoughts, morals and dreams....  
    Just to lead me into another
    meaningless fling that to
    you means absolutly nothing!!!
    I'll never have trust, faithfulness,
    A lifetime commitment or a diamond ring...
    Just a life full of anger, hurt, and regret
    & memories I'll never be able to forget...
    So, what do you care
    what's wrong with me?
    OPEN YOUR EYES AND SEE...

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    JoannaMorningst commented on What do you care what's wrong with me?

    10-02-2009

    i tried to rate this poem but a message said not applicable...what a hoot anyway i gave it a big fat 9

    Worthless

    10/02/2009

    Thank You for all your comments! I'm glad someone likes them! I write alot. Everything I write is pretty much the story of my life and what's happened to me. Some are real deep and there's alot of negativity, but it's all part of me...

    JoannaMorningst commented on What do you care what's wrong with me?

    10-02-2009

    you have mastered the art of poetry my dear friend...this is wonderful...i love reading your poems ,all are from the heart and in your sould ...kepp it up my friend

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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