what do you think rap is??


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rap is but a form of poetry you and me are but a form of poetry in flesh words have an emotion, it's called flow. flow is somethin that every living things can just taste every thing that is dead also has flow every thing thats not living can also taste flow

what do you think rap is??

 all these rappers twistin lines 
twisten words to write some rhymes
pull a cuss and twist a finger
but all the racism still lingers
i grip some pain to make poetry
they take cold hate on the mexican minorities
i twist a paddle and pull up and anchor
they act stupid and threaten to shank ya

<other worldly voice> what you think rap is??
what you think metal pop and blues is??
it's all born from poetry in it's awakening
but generations today lossen touch of reality
it's evidential  they to high for gravity 
they thought true work can't pull of miracles
but in the end i guess there meaning is debatable 

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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

clousxpain’s Poems (10)

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what do you think rap is?? 0
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