What Happened

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    What Happened

    When we fight,
    I cry wondering what happened.
    I always say the wrong thing,
    And you do the wrong thing.
    When we dont talk,
    Baby i miss you so much.
    What happened?
    First we were happy talking all the time,
    Not worrying about anything else.
    Only seeing stars in each others eyes
    Then it went to talking here and there
    And now fighting
    It hurts so much
    Im so sorry
    I'll watch what i say
    Because i want it to work out
    And want our plans to work
    So for now ill wipe my tears
    And keep thinking about you
    Untill the next time we talk.

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    christianprep commented on What Happened

    07-08-2009

    nicly written poem it flows good i think its wright written wright so i rate it a ten because its a good one, good job, it is sad though understandable though

    Drivingczar commented on What Happened

    04-26-2009

    Great write. Keep it up.

    Yoda413

    07/08/2009

    thanks for the comment =]

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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