WHAT IF?

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    WHAT IF?

    What If?

    Suppose 30 years ment more to you
    than bars and football and fame
    Suppose you put "us" first

    Suppose we were together still, because you took that step
    to listen to the only one who knew just what was best.

    Suppose that mid-life crisis turned the other cheek.

    What If?

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    Stryx commented on WHAT IF?

    10-12-2009

    Ah yes, the proverbial "if." And I imagine you have some in there as well...
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    SILKYTWEED commented on WHAT IF?

    06-24-2009

    This is a Beautiful Piece...posing the questions of if another path could have been taken or better yet averted...Love It Thanks!
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    dmo8647

    06/27/2009

    Wow, thanks for your comments! I really appreciate it. I will check on yours for sure.

    kdarcy commented on WHAT IF?

    04-21-2009

    its been said and done too many times, still a good read, knowing I am alone in my past travels. I also have a piece titled " What if ... ", there are several here, I may post mine very soon. If you find moment, please check my postings, thanks, be well
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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