What If?

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    What If?

    What if the sun refused for all time
    To light up your path each day?
    What if the moon refused to shine
    At night, when you lost your way?

    What if the birds refused to sing
    In the mornings, for you to hear?
    What if the church bells refused to ring
    Whenever you came near?

    What if your soul was torn apart
    And scattered from place to place?
    What if they took your broken heart
    And threw it back in your face?

    What if everyone in your life
    That you've ever loved and held dear,
    Walked away from you, heads held high
    Never even shedding a tear?

    What if everyone tossed you aside
    And told you they didn't care?
    What if you woke up in the night
    And realized, no one was there?

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    Teardrops commented on What If?

    12-24-2009

    Wonderful poem and so true in that case i wold find new family and friends to fill my life with

    tierra7 commented on What If?

    12-23-2009

    oh my...... that would be an abuse t, a torment infliction...that would shatter any soul ..that would die lil by lil each time a fragment of that love or relationship was chiseled.....these are Solid emotions...hits one in the gut...this brought tears not just to my eyes...but to my heart as well.....thank you for sharin'...it must of been difficult just to think of the write...i got into this poem...and i too think i would shed a tear in the process...Namaste...Merry Christmas...Terra @+-'-,- (10+ )

    MissBozelei

    12/24/2009

    Thank you so much for your heartfelt words. You are right, this was from the heart and very hard to write.

    Helios commented on What If?

    12-23-2009

    That would be the worst betrayal anyone can face, and I hope no one has to go through that suffering. Beautiful emotions in verses.

    MissBozelei

    12/24/2009

    Thank you for your support

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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