what imagery you evoke

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    what imagery you evoke
    i am lost in your web-
    your tongue, hands, breath
    entrance me; my thoughts
    no longer my own

    make me blush, make me
    wet with desire;
    even when i beg...
    don't stop

    ravage my body, torture me until
    i give into your every whim-
    your charm entangles my very essence;
    like an addiction i crave you

    making me scream, begging
    for your kiss, your touch,
    your tongue exploring every
    curve of my flesh

    when you're done,
    i'll ache for more
    as i only exist
    for your pleasure

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    BigDaddyCash commented on what imagery you evoke

    11-22-2009

    I try to write a new poem everyday (sometimes more) and I call my style MY Way. I love to write and reading satisfies my appetite. I get my material from what I read and from the people I meet. That's why I'm here to read your poetry. First I read your profile, which, by the way, was very remarkable, now I'm here to check out your magic words. Your message is clear, the imagery is flawless and the plot is represented with golden words of talent. You really are on target with this powerful choice of words. Your thoughts and feelings are felt in your amazing gift as a poet. Thanks for sharing and letting me sneak into the parlor where you stockpile your works of art. LOL, BDC
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    DSLitz

    11/22/2009

    thanks you for your kind words on my poetry, i appreciate them very much

    slohan4u commented on what imagery you evoke

    08-02-2009

    very hot. i like the "wet with desire" great erotic poem!!
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    kdarcy commented on what imagery you evoke

    04-11-2009

    Loved it
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    dahlusion commented on what imagery you evoke

    01-07-2009

    "make me blush, make me wet with desire; even when i beg... don't stop" ——— wow! I wasn't hard but I am now…
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    dumbas1 commented on what imagery you evoke

    01-06-2009

    Wow! That's a lucky(must be good to) guy!...you are a great poet as well!
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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