What its Like to Save a Life

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    What its Like to Save a Life

    By: Avello Le'Da Vid

    Calmness, Gental, an Uprise.
    How it comes out so beautiful and always ready to wager.
    Constantly growing, she steps to arise
    As she drift to become mother's nature.

    She watch and sat through a slow day
    And then came the change of the yield
    When the nice like breeze in a narrow passage way
    Became more as a compressed open field.

    When I came to see her standing by the edge of the lake
    When she called to him from a slide...
    As erosion then took place and raged
    Also came, the slipping, the rising,...the tide.

    Seconds to call for the "H" he ran, rushe, and dove.
    Thus, the gasping began.
    Making the "ELP" of the breath and hold
    The raging cabin on gasping became waters sin.

    An uproar came for its feast.
    Thoughts came with it. "Much,too much..."
    Clawing and the attack of the beast
    Left the last two tips to touch.

    Hushing the stream left with nocturnal silence,
    Chaos formed a sign of grief, not relief.
    Now alone left staning on a hand posted in violence
    Right with one hand reaching out and on both my knees.

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    Nicko7 commented on What its Like to Save a Life

    02-20-2009

    Fantastic imagery great use of words good lyrical flow it makes you stop and think to intriguing NICE WORK

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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