WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE

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    WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE

    ive been usin again
    up in those clouds- heroin and all of this wondering
    well its all been finally concluded
    i will have my name 4ever attached 2 another one
    what keeps me awake
    and i know the fact that its mine - they dont make her smile
    but storys they- just like the limelight- they have there chance of re-appearing
    trust me- i understand it all- its the only path ive ever been on!
    hes on the other line
    n were talkin about a future- i have never known
    hes on the other line- just as scared as me"
    ive been wakin up - dreamin about odd things
    sunlights the only thing that reminds me im awake
    im a shadow to him these days- but i promise that ill be a great woman to him
    hes on the other line
    n i bet your sleepin- dont let my goodnight wishes pass-

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    redbloodink commented on WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE

    03-20-2010

    What is keeping me awake is your writes....... just so raw........ love the emotion passion and pictures your writes come with....... red

    bforibus commented on WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE

    09-01-2009

    wow. this told a story of some many levels. i love that about this poem. 2 characters but with so much to tell. great no excellent job bambi.

    SilverGirl commented on WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE

    08-03-2009

    Wow.. such emotion. Such pain and confusion for you. I am with you, by your side. You are in my heart and prayers.. Hugs.. SG

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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