WHAT KIND OF CAR?

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WHAT KIND OF CAR?


With sweaty palms,
and knotted gut,

I quickly jumped in and slammed the door shut.

My brother beside me to guide me through,
Nervous; not sure of what to do.

"Not like that!" He complained,
and patiently he went through the instructions again.
our arguing was causing a rift.

I quickly argued; "It's not my fault your teaching on a stick shift!"

When it comes to cars I'm just a dumb blond.

If you ask me the make or model I'll just sigh and say "Oh come on!"

When asked "What kind of car do you drive?"

I simply reply "A grey one" and wait for the laughter to arrive.


When I once again fail to park just right.

I cry out in frustration;"I've had enough, goodnight!"

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StandingBear commented on WHAT KIND OF CAR?

09-15-2009

A very upbeat tempo work written with the gusto of sibling bonding at it's height. Great attitude, great write.

boomboom56 commented on WHAT KIND OF CAR?

09-14-2009

Good one. Sounds like you and your brother had a special relationship. Feel good writing. We could use more.

teasasue commented on WHAT KIND OF CAR?

09-12-2009

lol am2, I liked this one, I can feel my own fears of my first driving lesson on a stick, it sucked

alreedus commented on WHAT KIND OF CAR?

09-10-2009

Ahh, the first and primary rule of learning to drive - NEVER let a relative or GF/BF teach you. You are lucky you both got away without a scratch - from a fight, that is. Excellent write and oh so true. Rhyme is good and you captured me. Good voice. Thank you - Alan :-)

kittman101 commented on WHAT KIND OF CAR?

09-08-2009

awesome work but i think every one should learn on a stick shift. it tok me 5 minutes and i had to drive one.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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