WHAT MAKES LOVE, LOVE?

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    WHAT MAKES LOVE, LOVE?

    Love in any language, wisely you thought,

    there is nothing greater than saying the word 'love' from your heart,

    that love is everlasting, that love reign forever more,

    its always blossoming, in you it will grow.

    Love is like a rose that beautify your eyes,

    a flower that symbolizes, a love, that will never die.

    It's like the sound of music with melodies in your ear,

    with sounds of great harmony vaporizing in the air.

    It's like season upon seasons, time unto time,

    that brings to you honesty where you can say "you're mine."

    Love is not adjustable; it's not a machine,

    but it's capable of bringing to you, a relationship that is everlasting.

    Even the bees that sweeten our lips with honey,

    love is sweeter than it taste and it worth of money.

    What make's love so valuable to you?

    Its everlasting greatness, comfort, and peace it gives to you.

    The song says 'its love, its love, its love that makes the world goes around’.

    But a man's love which unfaithfully challenged will drop flat to the ground.

    Real love is affectionate and compassionate,

    and a love that never last, comes from lack of faith.

    Let your love shine,

    like the stars in the heaven's from time to time.

    Let love come to you in a straight line, not a curve,

    so you can see and understand what make's love, love.

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    iStrangeDucky commented on WHAT MAKES LOVE, LOVE?

    10-14-2009

    It reminds me of the Goddess of Love, Athena. If she had enough brain in her coniving, cheating, skank of a brain, she might produce love poetry like this.

    janetdawson commented on WHAT MAKES LOVE, LOVE?

    05-08-2009

    i liked very much

    iStrangeDucky

    10/14/2009

    So, like, is your name Janer, and you like Shane Dawson? Just curious. He's on youtube.com, his channel name is shanedawsontv, shanedawsontv2, and shanedawsontvnews.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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