What Point?

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neh, answer them to me if you can.

What Point?

what point is there to move on?
wheres the influence to live very long?
why should i bother to live another day?
with all this pain, is there a way?

whats stopping me from putting a plug in my head?
whats holding me back from becoming dead?
wheres a point that tells me to live on?
wheres a sign that nothing is wrong?

my life, my dreams, body and soul
are all in torture from life so cruel
so why do i bother continueing on?
when theres no point of being punished, i did nothing wrong

when did my time truly end?
when did i pass the last bend?
for me the road is clearly shown
between life and death, future unknown

so people like me, so what?
everyone has someone who likes them, lets be blunt
so why do i bother living a shitty life?
so why do i suffer from pain and strife

these are the questions i have always asked
these are the questions fro mmy life's present and past
these are the questions no one has ever answered
these are the questions from the tortured

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Qualin commented on What Point?

03-18-2010

GOOD WRITE AS FAR AS RHYME I CAN SEE YOU ARE GIFTED...MY ANSWER TO THE INTERNAL CRYING OUT FROM YOU IS "YOU AND AN UNINVITED FRIEND THAT WILL CREEP IN SUTTELY AND DEFINE HIMSELF THROUGH YOU,FOR IF IT WERE NOT TRUE YOU WOULD NOT BE HERE WRITING AND USING YOUR GIFTED TALENT....A FRRRIEND QUALIN

EvilPoems

03/20/2010

very true indeed, and thank you.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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