What you do

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    What you do

    You tried to push me away,
    which only made me fight to stay.
    You warned me not to be your friend,
    but I was much more then that in the end.
    You tried so hard to make me see,
    but I knew with you I wanted to be.

    You showed me how you really looked,
    just one glance and I was hooked.
    You finally broke down and gave in,
    but only to one battle I wanted to win.
    You vowed to always keep me from harm,
    protectiveness was part of your charm.

    You wouldn't take what I offered to you,
    it was just something you couldn't do.
    You loved me so much the way I was,
    but it hurts to touch me I know it does.
    You are much stronger then you think you are,
    but I haven't given up this battle by far.

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    DreamerGirl17 commented on What you do

    07-06-2009

    Wonderful and descriptive. You put a lot of emotion and work into this poem. Great Job.

    StandingBear commented on What you do

    07-03-2009

    I love the words of a strong, independent lady. Assertive, knows what she wants and goes after it. Great write.

    NYX commented on What you do

    03-16-2009

    this poem is really sumthin that teen like me are able to connect. =]

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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