Whatever it takes to never make that mistake, Again.

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The future is full of possibilities, so if it isn't working, there is something out there that will!

Whatever it takes to never make that mistake, Again.

Is not me

The same refractive pattern

Thread me a mystery

Blindfold me and with a passion

Free my repeating symmetry

Make an illusion of my past

Burial under grounded cemetery

Burned like trash past endevor

A fools gold,

Well never say never,

Searching for love,

Was never ever

Going to be very clever

In a heart of glass,

A tiny fragrence

of the smallest fragment,

Is all it takes to sever

The all of a sudden,

The peace in my hands,

Lays out along my palm,

Twisting along the fingers,

Imprinting creases along time,

Lines up an admit one pass,

To the Future, and look at that

Plus one, who'd have Guest!

Directions to turn the page,

To the future of your life anew,

Where people are plenty,

And Pain a choice again,

So many you haven't met yet,

Take chances, and live with no regret.

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LeonPride commented on Whatever it takes to never make that mistake, Again.

03-25-2013

Nicely versed, it leaves the imagination wanting for more.

HarverTomsson commented on Whatever it takes to never make that mistake, Again.

08-19-2011

You leave seductive clues here, and there, Dodging the light and shadows leaves one curious for more. I like this one

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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