What's going on part 1

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    What's going on part 1

      

    What's going on part 1

    This lady looking so good, body looking like toffee.
    She touching me softly, she can't keep her hands off me.
    I love to play with ice, now she calling me frosty.
    She told me lie down, why she being so bossy?
    She rubbing me with oils, now i'm looking so glossy.
    Shawty I ain't paying letting you know in case it cost me.
    I'm not going to jail now get these cuffs off me. 
    She got up and lefted out oh hell now she losted me. 
    My mind on panic and heart on BOOM! 
    She had a cop with her when she came in the room.
    They started dressing down, man I thought that I was doomed.
    But to my relief she had on a costume.

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    katzeyez1979 commented on What's going on part 1

    11-06-2011

    Thanks for the laugh,I sure did need it and I can't wait to read part 2 of this ,lol
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    FordLove

    11/10/2011

    LOL! Glad you liked it. I will work on it as soon as my heart stop hurting. Painful times for me.

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on What's going on part 1

    12-07-2010

    Still very funny to me, but a bit more refined. I really like the flow. Thanks for sharing........E
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    FordLove commented on What's going on part 1

    12-06-2010

    I had to redo this one. The part 2 of What's going on soon to come.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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