What's Hidden Within
My thoughts fall like rain drops on window panes
It feels as though nothing will ever be the same
These thoughts betray my feeling
How can emotions be so fleeting
Why do I feel so torn
I feel so lost
Don’t know what to do
I thought my life was perfect
It all has come unglued
Now everything is upside-down
Inside out and turned around
But the worst part yet
Is I don’t know if I can handle it
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07-15-2010
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To have great poets there must be great audiences too.
Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
|---|---|---|
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
| Too Late | 7 | 08/26/2010 |
| Ode to my Homie | 3 | 08/11/2010 |
| Love Lost | 12 | 07/13/2010 |
| Thoughts of the Past | 11 | 05/19/2010 |
| Behind the Facade | 9 | 04/28/2010 |
| the not so immaculate | 8 | 02/12/2010 |
| Why | 9 | 02/11/2010 |
| What's Hidden Within | 6 | 02/08/2010 |
| The Cutter | 15 | 02/01/2010 |
| You and Me | 9 | 01/25/2010 |
| Letting Go | 12 | 01/05/2010 |
| Alone | 15 | 07/13/2009 |
| The Depression of Youth | 18 | 06/19/2009 |
| Promises | 6 | 05/28/2009 |
| Good-bye | 5 | 05/27/2009 |
| Ending It All | 12 | 05/27/2009 |
| Darkness | 9 | 05/26/2009 |
| What I Thought You Were | 6 | 05/26/2009 |
| The Fire | 22 | 05/26/2009 |
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