When [ 11/10/09 ]

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  • MikaylaMisfit
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November 10, 2009

When [ 11/10/09 ]

When you look at me

Can you tell me what you see?

Am I all you thought me to be?

Or am I less than what you need?

 

When you say I love you

Is it really true?

Am I your everything?

Or do I mean nothing to you?

 

You’re my world

You’re my everything

Baby I need you.

Do you need me too?

 

When I cry,

Do you care to try?

Are you here for me?

Or should I just leave?

 

I laugh, you laugh

I cry, you care

Baby when the world falls apart

You’ll be my rock in the rain.

 

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Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

MikaylaMisfit’s Poems (20)

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