When a rose cries

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    When a rose cries

    When a rose cries, it opens my eyes,
    to see my friend alone in bed.
    When a rose cries, it opens my eyes,
    to see my mom crying out her eyes.
    When a rose cries, it opens my eyes,
    to see someone who never cries.
    When a rose cries, it opens my eyes,
    to see their eyes fill up with tears as they listen and hear the cries of the roses that are so near.

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    Musicmynded1 commented on When a rose cries

    02-02-2010

    I like this piece twilight.................................. :)

    TheAngelOfDeath commented on When a rose cries

    09-26-2009

    Great poem but still you need to mix up your style a bit and add a chorus as so to say to a good song..

    Jayandben commented on When a rose cries

    08-14-2009

    I love this poem. I have a hard time cring. My best friend died when I was younger and nothing has been the same since. Ive lost many friends to natural causes and some highly unnatural. I just feel like the world around me is crashing down but there is no way to help them except to be strong for them. Keep up the good work. If you ever need to talk, I'm all ears. I write as well. I hope you check it out. I guess what I basically live by is this: I use all the dreadful and heartbreaking moments to make the little nigh insignificant ones seem so much more important. It's srt of what keeps me going.

    alicecullen commented on When a rose cries

    07-27-2009

    thats really good. its a peaceful poem and we do all cry at somepoint in life

    cliftondurant commented on When a rose cries

    07-18-2009

    HEART warming and touching poem we all has to cry sometime god job

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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