When Day is Done

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  • Mandi
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When Day is Done

When Day is done,
And the moon has punched a hole,
High into the dark of night.
Then this is the time for reflection.

To look back on the day
To see what I've done 
Did I destroy whatever I did right...
I must be at my life's intersection.

The End of Days was prophesied
It could be now, could it not?
For sure, I have tried to follow your bidding.
Either way, I did my best.

Have I  not done what I could ?
Did  I destroy where there was Love?
Yes, to bring the beast into your prescence.
Have I not put my heart to the Test?











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papaya commented on When Day is Done

09-29-2009

VERY GOOD...I LIKED IT ALOT...KEEP IT UP...U WILL GO FAR

Mandi

11/02/2009

thanjknyou for taking the time to read my poetry

RebeccaKempf33 commented on When Day is Done

09-28-2009

wow very deep, wonders where ur mind was at this moent as I write from pure emotion myself.

Mandi

11/02/2009

thank you for taking the time to read my poetry

gogant commented on When Day is Done

09-26-2009

The end of days--or the beginning of hope that will endure for those who look beyond their tiny faults...................

Mandi

09/29/2009

inteeresting that you should mention End of Days

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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