When I Looke At You


  • Lost Love

    When I Looke At You

    When I look at you
    I feel happy and comfort
    When I look at you
    My heart feels complete and my soul feel like it has a mate
    When I look at you
    I see your baby blue eyes, that I fell in love with
    When I look at you
    I see my life with you forever
    Yes, I would say this was true love
    But now I can no longer look at you
    Without getting SICK

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    keithrberryjr commented on When I Looke At You


    i like the ending.wasnt expecting it

    Silentbetrayal commented on When I Looke At You


    I enjoyed the twist at the end. Caught me off guard.

    brandon commented on When I Looke At You


    that was great a lil shocker at the end but still great you keep leaving me asking for more

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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