When I Met You

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8th poem in my notebook. this is a poem i wrote when i was dating a girl named Leah and she really did make me happy but it turned out that she need to be happy so i left her for her sake of getting better and we have bothed moved on and i am in a wonderful relationship now =D

When I Met You

When I met you
I was dead
I've put the bullet through my head
When i met you
I was dying
And now each and every day
I'm trying to be happy
Because you make it so easy
And I never wanna leave you
Cause you help me stay sain
When I met you
I was broken
And you're taping me back up
When I met you
You changed my life
In my best way you could
You saved me
From darkness
And put me back
In the light
When I met you
I was nothing inside
But now when we talk
I'm full to the brim
Stuffed with the joy you give me
When I met you
I fell in love with you
instantly

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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Only The Young 0
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What You've Said To Me 0
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These Wounds That You Made 0
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Inside the Lies That Lie in the Photographes 0
You Are Safe Now 0
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When You're Gone 0
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