When i was a child

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  • Life
    • Kaylimazza
    • I;m Falin in love but its fallin apart i need to find my way back to the start that led my back into your arms...

    When i was a child

    When i was a child
    born in confusion
    askin myself
    whats this? whos? that? why are they touching me?


    as a toddler i learned the was of life
    what no means
    and when to listen and when not to listen


    as a preteen i have learned a lot
    where babies come form
    boys have cooties
    mom and dad fight a lot


    The teens were my favorite years
    why boys stare at your breasts
    why school is important
    why you make a difference in the world


    as i continue to grow
                         i learn more and more every day

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    Musicmynded1 commented on When i was a child

    02-24-2010

    very good down to earth write............................... keep it up

    Kaylimazza

    02/25/2010

    Awww thank you

    Ninjaboy commented on When i was a child

    02-20-2010

    a very interesting poem, it descripts a lot of things

    WinterFrost commented on When i was a child

    02-15-2010

    well at least your last stanza didn't end with the same line your first stanza did ;

    kage commented on When i was a child

    02-15-2010

    this is a great worded poem it makes perfict sense to me and will to others i think

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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