When I Was With You

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    When I Was With You

    When I was with you
    I felt happy and comfort
    When I was with you
    I felt complete
    When I was with you
    I felt my heart had a soul
    When I was with you
    I felt love
    When I was with you
    I felt safe when you held me close, kissed me tenderly
    Now you are gone and never thought how I would feel

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    esroddo commented on When I Was With You

    03-18-2009

    Over all I enjoyed your write. With alot of emotion. It hard when we are loved and feel complete then that special person goes away. And our dreams are left empty and we feel sad inside. Wonderful write. Lisa

    magati commented on When I Was With You

    03-18-2009

    just reminded me tht my lady isnt with me, for its whn i am with her tht am whole...

    keithrberryjr commented on When I Was With You

    03-14-2009

    great poem.i really like this.keep it up

    brandon commented on When I Was With You

    03-11-2009

    i enjoyed reading that i felt the same way once b4 god it sucked

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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