When i'm with you.

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    When i'm with you.
    Together with you ,i wish i was.when i'm with you and yours hands are all over my body.when you make love to me.I could see the stars and heaven,i could see colors in the clouds.. my spirit ,my mind could fly away and experience things that without you i can't......your presences in my life is unique,very imp. to me .no one makes me feel like you do to me....no one could satisfied me like you do....WHEN i'm with you.....

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    bforibus commented on When i'm with you.

    01-24-2009

    i love the feel and emotion of this, but i didnt feel the passion of erotica.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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