When just when

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    When just when
               When just when     
                Will this ride end?

     

                   When just when      

            Have you been alone?

               When you returned you have grown

     

         When just when 

        Do you want to go home?

     

     When just when

       To The place unknown  

     

    When just when

      Will you find a new home?

     

    When just when

      On the earth or in the sky

     

    When just when

      Will we die?

     

    When just when

      In a strange place will we know?

     

    When just when

      Where to find this place unknown 

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    frog commented on When just when

    08-19-2009

    Good open ended questions. Normally, I cannot remained focused with repititious phrasing, but this poem continued to capture my attention.
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