When love used to make me feel 10 feet tall

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    I WROTE THIS POEM LIKE 6 MONTHS AGO...  WHEN ME N MY EX BROKE UP.

    I HOPE YOU LIKE IT !!
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    When love used to make me feel 10 feet tall

    I wish upon a star....hopeing i find the other part of my hart.
    I look at these couples today so in love and happy.
    (IT MAKES ME SICK!!)
    Cant help but envy how they kissed.
    And cant rember the last time i was that happy and so i reminsed.
    And how much i miss the excitement of being in love or feelin blissed.

    Then I look at the guy i'm with.

    Is this the man i wanna spend the rest of my life with?
    Bord out of my freaking mind i wanna take a rope and hang my self and die!
    Cant rember the last time we celabrated our aniversy And went out just the two of us & none of his friends coming with us
    Now all we do is stay home...and watch t.v.
    WOOOOPEEE DOOOOOOO!
    I wish i had what they have.
    I wish i had A conection....but thers nothing but static.
    I wish to go back in time and feel a connection and just feel love.
    I feel we are distant growin apart he'll always have a place in my hart.
    i look at these couples i cant help but cry filled with envy....and missing it all. when love used to make me feel to feet tall


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    By Karma


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    stellar commented on When love used to make me feel 10 feet tall

    11-13-2009

    I love this so much...YEah love always elevate our emotions...LOve is always an amplifier...

    countrypoet commented on When love used to make me feel 10 feet tall

    10-23-2009

    I like this poem and can relate.Sometimes we get into a rut when we are in a relationship and need to have a heart to heart talk with our significant other to try to resolve issues and get back to the reasons that we were atracted to them at the beginning.Hang in there and don't lose faith.

    HakiNatuwah1 commented on When love used to make me feel 10 feet tall

    10-14-2009

    I love the emotion that you put into your pieces, but you must overstand poetry is not only meant as a way of releasing your own emotions. But also a way of freeing others through your words. I feel the pain that you feel sweetie, but I also want to feel the joy. I also want to read your pieces and get something out of them for myself. Basically my advice is to try to leave everyone who reads your pieces with the feeling that you included them to. No matter how small of apart that is.....^_^

    mdpoetgirl commented on When love used to make me feel 10 feet tall

    10-02-2009

    I know the feeling, Karma. But I think you felt particularly bad because the breakup was still pretty fresh. And being in love does make you feel bigger, like you're floating on air, or some other fairytale sensation. That intense high is not intended to last forever, but there is an eternal high that never goes away - the LOVE of GOD. And the good thing is that it NEVER leaves you, NEVER disappoints. People walk in and out of your life, but GOD never leaves you. Wishing you many more days and years of happiness...

    Worthless commented on When love used to make me feel 10 feet tall

    10-02-2009

    Relationships these days are based on Lust, Rape, Distrust, Alcohol, and drugs!!! That's all men want!!! They would rather beat you,use you, abuse you and leave you to go sleep with a whore at the bar!!! The have no care or feelings even if it's your heart their stealing... They lie to get what they want and then when you say you'll go out with them they tell you part truth and you find out the rest thru the years... The torture never ends! God should have never created man!!!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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