When She Comes

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about cousin who past away at 28 of cancer

When She Comes

When she comes around my head, she leaves the morning behind
when she comes around my head again, she reminds me that everything is fine
you became the shadow of a body that you were once inside
I don't understand, I don't understand

I don't know, I don't know, why she left so young
all I know is I feel better when she comes

You came in a dream last night, you said that you were here
yea, yoiu came in a dream last night and you made everything so clear
when I awoke from my dream last night, I saw that you had disappeared
I don't understand, I don't understand

I don't know, I don't know, why she left so young
all I know is I feel better when she comes

Now I never stay awake at night
cause I know that you are there with me
now I understand, now I understand

But, I don't know, I don't know, why she left so young
all I know is I feel better when she comes

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killingP13 commented on When She Comes

01-22-2011

youre poem is beautiful but makes me want to know who that special person is? why did she leave so young :(

sunshine33710 commented on When She Comes

11-13-2010

wow that was good, but who is this that you are talkin about and how old was she when she left? Your Friend Sunshine

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