When we Relize


When we Relize

At times we might want to give in
At times we may want to give up
We may say I just dont care anymore
Are want everyone to leave you alone
We may feel as if nobody else could ever understand
Maybe we say some words that shouldnt have been said
We may hate it when others try to help

We are still here
We are still standing
We havent gave up
We havent gave in
We will make it
We will pull through

Your not alone
You do need help
Not everyone is out to get you
Not everyone is that person
We all need that person to tell us what we dont want to hear but need to hear

                      In the end
Everyone needs a hand
Everyone needs a slap till they wake up
Everyone needs Everyone!

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gregster commented on When we Relize


i guess your right on this one..and truth is you said it boldly and it awesome.we do need eachother.great job




carmentis commented on When we Relize


thats true we all require some assistance but in thoughts that transeced the one of best friends you will ever have is the very one that will tell you in the end your not worth giveing up on nor are you worth quiting and keeps a distant to let you fall and gives you a hand to get up when your down.i hope everyone can find on of these



I hope so too! Thanks for your comment!!!

featherscribe commented on When we Relize


You are loved. You are cared for. You are a wonderful helper for your peers. You inspire many! Thank you for writing poetry.



wow!! that was really nice thanks!! thats always nice to hear :D

edgee commented on When we Relize


I think this poem shows heart and sould poured in and i think that you, at the age you are, would be going thru alot and you need a shoulder to lean on but the poetry is on point and so many people need to read this.....you have the gift so dont let it pass yo by....look forward to checking out more of your work.....



wow thanks!! I never really thought i had a talent to write i just enjoy it so why not... but honestly thanks that was very nice to hear!!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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