WHEN YOU LEFT

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    WHEN YOU LEFT

    When you left

    When you left
    It felt like sudden death,
    Cold like ice
    I could hardly rise
    As bright as the day
    The sun had no ray
    As dark as the night
    Your presence caused no fright

    Tossed in the wind
    Almost like a wind-mill
    Trying to understand why dudes like you
    Are so few
    It led me to the woods
    Where I was almost eaten by fools

    It left me in tears long and bitter
    Could fill any pitcher
    Loud were the cries
    Didn’t matter the spies
    As I comfort myself
    With the comfort from thyself

    Will I see you again?
    I can’t bear the wrenching pain
    Even to cross the ocean or take the plane
    I will have to beat the rain
    For waiting in vain
    Will not avail

    And so when we meet
    We will greet and cheat
    With love and kisses
    And our many wishes
    Will blend with laughter
    Like the happy psalmster.


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    Grito commented on WHEN YOU LEFT

    03-22-2009

    The summer heat, that heats one and all!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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