When

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True honest friends are an extension of our family, and ofter family can be our best friends - YOU'LL ALWAYS KNOW WHEN

When

When

 

When there is danger, I will go before you.

When there is confrontation I will stand beside you.

When you need encouragement, I will be behind you all the way.

 

When you are ill I will comfort you.

When you cannot stand, I will pick you up.

When you cannot go any further I will carry you.

 

When I was frightened, you protected me.

When I faced confrontation, you were there to support me.

When I needed encouragement, you were my inspiration.

 

When I was sick you made me better.

When I had fallen, you helped me up.

When I thought I could not go on you allowed me to lean on you.

 

 

When is for when-ever:

When it’s the beginning and when it’s the end.  When I need a smile or you need a friend.  Just say WHEN……

 

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FitzHouston09 commented on When

04-13-2010

Nice poem. The kind of love described in this poem transcends the love you mentioned from family and true friends. It also describes that unconditional love felt in a close relationship with God. Thanks for sharing.

Tempy commented on When

08-20-2009

When is for when-ever: When it’s the beginning and when it’s the end. When I need a smile or you need a friend. Just say WHEN…… foo fighters comes to mind gotta promise not to stop when I say when. I liked this its a heart felt loving embrace

Seek2BInspired

09/02/2009

A great pleasant outlook - thank you for sharing your words with mine...

Clementinewoods commented on When

08-16-2009

This is a beautiful poem!!! This poem is an example of a true friendship and true love. Everyone needs at least one friend like this. One is always available in Jesus, because He'll be a Friend that will stick closer to you than a brother!!! Thanks for sharing and be blessed!!!

Seek2BInspired

09/02/2009

You my dear are always a pleasure to hear from... I love your way of thinking!

GentleT commented on When

08-12-2009

When there is no one else there it is wonderful to have one you can depend on.

Seek2BInspired

09/02/2009

You said it all - how true, the need for friendship is a lifeblood to the soul... the right friend can make the world a different place and always guarantee a smile on ones face!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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