Where I would go

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    Where I would go

    The thin black cat stretched slowly
    Needling the white picket fence
    Leapt down into a dark lee
    Into shadows, a mere presence
    Down to dark places that cats go
    And only cats seem to know
    I wish to go where cats go
    And know what only cats can know

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    PamelaALamppa commented on Where I would go

    10-22-2009

    The pondering - I sense the influence of Frost in this write - his ever questioning mind. Nice work. ~Pamela
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    Legos12 commented on Where I would go

    08-03-2009

    lol, this is sorta odd, but entertaining again, I personally am not very fond of cats, but this is good :)
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    SEVEN commented on Where I would go

    07-07-2009

    I'm not a cat person but this piece got me wondering if I were a cat where would I go?....Thanks for puttn that thought in my head....Now to go write about my dog and y he licks himself.... lol.....good write.....kudo points for u...
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    laydbak1 commented on Where I would go

    06-27-2009

    Most men don't care for cats or, so the stereotype says this is true... I know their loyalties are very fleeting, tied instinctively to food acquisition... I'm still mesmerized at time by them, however... That laser sharp quickness which defines them... The ability to do absolutely nothing but, sleep for hours on end, then slip almost casually into this mysterious creature, where they play out the cat and mouse game with anything that looks killable... Great simple write Frost, enjoyed the read....
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    kmeadows commented on Where I would go

    06-22-2009

    I love cats. What a great subject. Personally I think you can never say enough about a sweet kitty! Great job, another enjoyable piece!
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