where the (f***) she gone

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    this was a challenge , one of my friends gave me a title and said write a poem in 2 mintues and this is what I came up with, so my poem to his title where the fuck she gone...may be bad but here it is lol

    where the (f***) she gone

     gave my heart to her
    but where the fuck she gone?
    fugitive is flailing
    cupid aint got her on the run
    gave every fucking piece i had
    and shes leaving me with this hole
    to fill it up with emptiness
    with memories of her
    where the fuck she gone today?
    heart on the mend, hurt aint goin away
    didnt leave trails for me to chase
    just left me with space
    to smother me, prison me
    keeping me company, misery
    dont know where the fuck she gone today
    but pray to god she stays away

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    monkyntz commented on where the (f***) she gone

    10-16-2009

    really loved this one nice work in 2 minutes love the ending
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    simoneaugustus commented on where the (f***) she gone

    10-14-2009

    Wow!!! I absolutely love this one!!! And it is amazing that you came up with it in just 2 minutes! Bravo!!
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