WHERE WOULD I BE

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    WHERE WOULD I BE
    Where would I be
    Without you in my life
    I'd be scared, alone
    And filled with strife
    My days and nights drag
    While you are gone
    Having you love me
    Helps me to go on

    Just where would Ibe
    Today without you
    So this I must answer
    Complete and true
    I'd be an empty shell
    Dead on the inside
    Riding an emotional
    Ocean at high tide
    I'd hide from myself
    And definitely others
    If you and I
    Couldn't be together
    SKY

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    Benjamin commented on WHERE WOULD I BE

    02-19-2009

    Just a typo on the first line of the second stanza bro. Separate the "I" and the "be" and I would've given this a 10 lol.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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