Where You Are

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Dedicated to the one I love.

Where You Are

Sometimes I wonder where you go

What roads you cross

How you get there

What you do in that place

 

Other times I fantasize of where you are

Where that place is

What color the walls are

If there is any walls

 

One time I told you where you should be

Where it’s warm

The sun chases the moon dramatically

That place is so lovely…

 

A few times I dreamt of where you’ll be

How you’ll get there

Will I be there?

I just want to be where you are.

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TheLastCowboy commented on Where You Are

09-17-2012

Love the way this poem makes my Heart wonder and feel, good write!

lisaner commented on Where You Are

09-17-2012

Very lovely poem start to finish. The last stanza especially.

sincerelymari

09/18/2012

Thank you, that means a lot. (:

Brianandhiscats commented on Where You Are

09-16-2012

Hi. That was really good. I think everyone must know that feeling, the uncertainty and the aching. I loved it.

sincerelymari

09/16/2012

Thank you.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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