Which one ?

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    Which one ?

    Stuck between twonot to mention others.
    Trying to figure out whos what and whos not what they say they are.
    You want say you love them but you dont.
    And you dont know to trust any more.
    Cause they used you for so long.
    That you dont know what is right from wrong anymore.
    You try to escape them but cause they are stuck in your mind to much .
    You wonder if they are okay or if they are lying dead somewhere.
    But all you do is worry about them until you here from their voice on the phone or in person.

    But you always hate that part cause you have no clueif they are okay and not in danger or in harms way.
    But when you see them you know that they are okay living and breathing still.

    You have one that is nice and the other that is your badside that you like so much and dont want to lose at all.
    But which one would you keep forever ?

    You want the both of them but you cant cause you would hurt one or the other.
    Which one would you hurt frist?

    you want a hero but which one will you love always forever?

    You tell me

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    Rendida commented on Which one ?

    08-08-2009

    WOW.... what a conflict...such emotion...I could feel the pain... I hope you resolved it.

    Vincent commented on Which one ?

    08-03-2009

    good job, I think it needs clairity though, I would like to see how it would read if it was structured better. smiles Vincent

    forbiddenfruit

    08/03/2009

    in wat kind of way do you mean cause i think it really could use someone elses opion

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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