Whispers in The Night

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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Sonnet #2.......hope it passes the test.............lol

Whispers in The Night

Whispers carried softly to my dreams
When you are next to me, I feel your heartbeat
Your touch takes my heart to its fullest extremes
I dream of your kiss upon my lips so sweet

When I close my eyes, I feel you breath on my skin
Nighttime finds you wrapped in my satin sheet
My soul soars free through the night, your twin
When I wake I still smell your lingering scent so sweet

When you think of me, from your golden resting place?
Do you see my face in your dreams, as I do yours?
When I whisper your name, will you come into my embrace?
When the night falls stars excite our
spirits with magical explores


I hear your whispers blowing through my soul and into my heart
Taking my thoughts into the sky of blue, never to be apart


Written by:
Asha`di
2010©

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ginga commented on Whispers in The Night

08-21-2010

Asha, Loving and tender words are so welcome in this poem of sharing with another . ginga

ApaqRasgirl

08/21/2010

thank you dear again for your wonderful comment...I am happy that my simple words can carry so much meaning for the reader.....love asha

knight4696 commented on Whispers in The Night

08-20-2010

Asha ... This is a beautiful romantic write ... So eloquently stated. Another great write! :) Ken

ApaqRasgirl

08/20/2010

thank you ken, I and so thrilled you like my humble words....I just posted a new one called 'Sweet Emotions of Natures Grace".....read it when you have the time.....I am just sitting her listening to my favorite music which often inspires my words.....thanks for reading and the sweet comments....loves ya asha

Teardrops commented on Whispers in The Night

08-18-2010

This is beautiful and caring and the way i feel about my late husband thanks for posting it . My fav Marie

ApaqRasgirl

08/18/2010

thank you dear for the sweet comment.......loves ya asha

Maleficent commented on Whispers in The Night

08-18-2010

this one is my favorite of yours so far!! =) it flows like water thru dreamz... fantastic imagery & perfect rhyme create an ultra-romantic setting... straight to my fav's! write on! ;)

ApaqRasgirl

08/18/2010

thank you dear for that sweet comment, and for the help....I changed it a little more so you might want to look again.........thanks so much .....loves ya asha

Maleficent

08/18/2010

I still luv it! ;)

ApaqRasgirl

08/18/2010

thanks again.....loves ya asha

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