"Whispers To My Son"(Revised)

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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"Whispers To My Son"(Revised)

Whispers To My Son
Happy Birthday

Hear!!
The Winds Glorious Tune and Feel Peaceful...
As a Swan Soaring on the Winds so Graceful...

Listen!!
As the Wind Carries Whispers to You, so Sweet...
Feel the Delight & Be Lighthearted, Free & Complete...

My, Whispers!!
In the Wind have Found You, Kissing Your Heart, with Mommies Words of Truth...
From My Heart, the Whispers in the Wind are Weaved Only for You...

Calm & Complete!!
The Whispering Wind, Begins to Clear, Their Messages Delivered...
The Winds Whispers
now Soar Freely in all Directions, with Ease... 

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The Voice That Whispers In The Wind
To You, Is Mommies

Whispers To My Son

Close Your Eyes

Listen! As Whispers of Night, find Your Heart Partially Missing,
Loves Words, Hear Them Now in
Your Heart and Soul, Reminiscing


I Am, the Voice of My Past, be Not Afraid.
Come Follow Mommies Heart, and Let the Rain
Wash Away, All the Sorrow from Your Heart.
Together We shall Lay them to Rest in the Past, far Apart
From Us, and Both move Forward in Your Life, with Loving Hearts.

Hear! The Whispers of the Wind Blowing cross Crystal Skies of Blue,
See the Colors of the Whispers Blend, inside Your Heart so True.

I Am, but One of the Voices, of Your Future.
Enjoy the path Your Journey will take, in Your Future,
Discovering Your Destiny,  Your Future is Yet, Unwritten, in Life
I Pray Your Future still has Room in Your Heart, for Mommies Love , Inside.

You Don’t Need to Hold onto the Last Words Said,
Let the Wind come to You, through One’s Eyes & into Your Heart & Soul
Bringing New Words of Love, Whispered to You each Day, Instead.

I Am, the Voice in Your Soul
Let Me help Guide Your Soul to Freedoms Heights
Filled with Love, Grace & Peace for Your Destinies Goal


Feel The Wind

Let the Whispers on the Wind Touch You & Feel Alive,
And know, You’ve Nothing Missing in Life.

I Am, the Voice that Whispers to You as Night Descends.
Like the Whippoorwill Singing his Love Song,
Feel Me Releasing all the Sorrow and Pain, to there Ends.
It's Time to let them Go, set
Free Your Heart to Grow Strong.

Let the Whispering Winds carry the Sounds of Serenity
Of Your Hearts Freedom, Drifting on to Find its Identity

I Am, the  Voice Beating in Both our Hearts.
Throughout all My Days of this Life, thats Left of Mine.
My Heart is Wishing to Hold You Close Again, Never Apart,
As I Once Held, My Precious Babe to My Breast, so Divine.

Grasp the Hurling Motion of Wind, My Son & Fly,
With Your Spirit & Mine, let Them Float Free as the Eagle in the Sky.

I Am, the Voice Whispering to Your Spirit.
May Your Spirit always Sail Free with Mine & Your Fathers,
Let it Drift on the Winds Free, Light with Joy, Peace & Serenity.

Hear! My, ‘I love yous,” Whispering on Natures Breath, like Fine Art
As the Wind Carries Them like Chiffon, to Your Heart

I Will be the Voice Whispering in Your Dreams.
When Night Descends and Takes You,
Into Your Dreamland, let My Prayers be Blessed in Your Grand Esteems,
Hear me Calling your name, Timmy, I Love You!!,
Like the Seas Love the Shore, & Fairies Love their Schemes.

Hear The Whispers

 Let the Whispers enter Your Heart, as One
Of Natures Child's, for it Flows in Your Veins, My Son

I Am, the Voice Howling in the Forest.
The Wind Gusting through the Trees Blowing,
A Cool Breeze through the Valley's Lowest,
The Whispers, that I Cherish in My Heart, are the Love Owing,
For the One Child born to me, for all the Years to Come, life's Hardest.

 Take My Hand in Your Dreams My Son, lets Follow
Natures Celestial & Gracious path and Peacefully Gaze upon, many a Fairy Swallow

I Am, the Voice in the Spring, when New Life Begins Again.
I Pray that the New Season of Falls Colors,
That Glisten like a Rainbow in Sunlight & Drives away the Misery Bane,
As the Whispers find Your Heart in Peace & Light of Loves Galores.

I Am, the Whispers in the Pouring Rain & Windstorm
Hear them, Night & Day, Calling your Name,
Forever more, Calling, in the Whispers Storm

I Am, the Voice Shouting, in the Wind & Pouring Rain.
For even Then, the Whispers, Carry My Love for You.
Be it Raining or Howling Winds, Slowly They Wane
Through, to Carry My Love to You, Tears Shed for You,
Night & Day, My Heart Misses Your Sparkling Eyes, with Pain.

The Whispers in the Wind, Carry the Messages
For the Physical Me, without Appendages

Whispers are the of the Physical Me, Unheard.
Though You do not Hear my Physical Voice very Often, in Your Life these Days,
My Thoughts and Prayers are with You, Day & Night, Undeterred.
I Miss You Timmy, I Miss You Sadly, I Love You, Forever & Always.

Have A Glorious Happy
Fifteenth Birthday

Mommy Loves you
My Darling Son,
Timothy Sewell Morris
XOXOXOXOXO

For My Darling Son Timmy Whom I Miss So Very Much

Written by:
Pamela Turtle Collins
  Asha
2010©


 

 

 


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Dano commented on "Whispers To My Son"(Revised)

08-26-2010

wow i love the emotion... i am not really sure what to say about this... i feel it from your heart... nicely written

ApaqRasgirl

08/26/2010

thank you dear, for those sweet words, I am happy that you liked it........love asha

MindNumbing commented on "Whispers To My Son"(Revised)

08-26-2010

Asha, I've already told you how much I love this... but I wanted to drop by and give it my formal seal of approval, complete with a 10 rating. Your son is beautiful, and he's a lucky kid to have a mother with such a passionate and compassionate soul.

ApaqRasgirl

08/26/2010

oh thank you dear so very much for those heartfelt words that I know came from your heart.......yes he is a beautiful child.....and I miss him very much.......I spent pretty much all night last night redoing this one, I have not been to bed yet,,,,,,I wanted it to be the best I could make it.........now I just have to get them printed up and framed for him........thanks for reading it again........loves ya bunches asha

ApaqRasgirl

08/26/2010

lol, that look on his face, like surprise......lol....he is holding my two babies Kodo and Podo the ferrets......he likes them..........he does not look that old in the picture, he is a small boy he was a premie.....I just hope he is tall like his dad and not short like mommy.........lol

nonners commented on "Whispers To My Son"(Revised)

08-24-2010

i know too the unbearable pain of being so far from those you are a piece of. i love the imagery-i believe the wind to carries our love and hopes across the miles,and in their hearts they know how much we care. great job. good luck always

ApaqRasgirl

08/24/2010

thank you dear for your heartfelt comment. I am still working on it and hopefully I will get it the way I want it to be for him.....thanks for reading........love asha

gogant commented on "Whispers To My Son"(Revised)

08-24-2010

Truly beautiful thoughts, and plenty of tears shed by you in the writing, I'm sure. Your son should be overwhelmed with these words that you have given just for him...................................g

ApaqRasgirl

08/24/2010

thank you dear, for those kind words, and yes I have shed many tears over this one, and I am not done with it........I am still stumbling over it, and think it is way too long.......but I am getting the hang of it, so hopefully will have a good one to send to him.......thanks dear for reading and commenting.....loves ya asha

WordSlinger commented on "Whispers To My Son"(Revised)

08-24-2010

~Hear!! My ‘I love yous” whispering on natures breath, like fine art~ ~And the wind carry them like chiffon, to your heart~ Love will build a bridge'Judds, Love is King'God, Whispers To My Son'Asha, all three can not ever fall, amazing Asha, love it ty WS

ApaqRasgirl

08/24/2010

thank you dear for that sweet comment, I am stumbling badly on this one, my boyfriend says it to complex for him.........so I am still working on it,,,,,,almost in tears as to why I cannot find the words for this one.........thanks dear for all.......loves ya asha

ApaqRasgirl

08/24/2010

I like that part you added. 'love will build a bridge'

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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