Whispers

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Whispers


Whispers

Dancing around
         a shadow's ghost
Learning to live
    with feelings, raw

Dedicated to the wonder
  of the thrill of surrender
Forging relationships
                        on shaky ground.

Attepting to trust
   with so many not worthy
an unsettling bond
        of misery and hope.

The tick of passing time
in the gleam of the sun
   Evening closes in
         and consciousness fades....

the rasp of metal
           and muted wood
the confines of the mind
the whisper of the heart.

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unchainedsorrow commented on Whispers

06-15-2009

thank you for commenting on my write. i really like this piece and i look forward to reading more of you :) unchained

chasingshadows

06/15/2009

Thank you for your comment....I enjoy your work, and look forward to more! Contact me anytime!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

chasingshadows’s Poems (19)

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FEVER 1
Light 0
Sleep? 1
Could It Be? 1
Withdraw 1
Harvest 0
Visions 0
I 1
The Bond 0
Phoenix 0
Head Blossom 2
FOCUS 1
THUNDER 0
Breath 2
LIFE 0
the broken 0
Whispers 1
Tomorrow 0
Chasing Shadows 0