WHITE KNUCKLES AND PUKE

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  • monkyntz
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WHITE KNUCKLES AND PUKE

you bitch about my roller coaster

you know, the one you ride sometimes

well remember me

i ride it every fuckin' day

twenty-four seven non stop

sometimes spinning out of control

until i puke or even black out

but then i remember

when it was only a thirty second ride

it was really fun

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HarverTomsson commented on WHITE KNUCKLES AND PUKE

11-25-2009

In the realm of the senses, both the desert and the deluge can make you crazy.

Writer1 commented on WHITE KNUCKLES AND PUKE

11-25-2009

Interesting read. I came up with a saying..here goes: "It was fun while it lasted, but it lasted too long." People always end with the "fun while it lasted" part. But THIS is a perfect example of what I'm trying to say when I tell people this (who rarely get it, BTW). :) Enjoyed!!!!

DSLitz commented on WHITE KNUCKLES AND PUKE

05-03-2009

love it.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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SERPENTREE 2
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BOW WOW 2
TIMELESS LOVE 1
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