Whether Changes

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    Weather and life, unpredictable yet, they still flow, maybe.

    Whether Changes

    Flashes pass, the thunders crash, yet still I cannot see.

    A storm thats gathering changes everything it passes, as it heads out to sea.

    The water gathers, clouds go on passing leaving behind that which was them,

    Until the ocean swallows all that follows, so none would ever see

    The little foot print, the pause, the instant that was me.

    Or so I thought, I must have forgot, that there would be some to say,

    Hey I remember you , I saw what you did, it was just the other day.

    You can make a change, it may be small, it might not even be seen by all.

    They knew you were there, but they didn't care, for them you were where you should be.

    Doing the things you felt important making sure all could see,

    Or not, and wonder what ever came to be,

    Of that world, when all was free, a cloudless sky and me.

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    combatrider commented on Whether Changes

    01-07-2012

    You come and go letting chance decide what you don't want to. Storms come and go but no one really notices the singluar drops but rather the mass as it goes flashing.

    combatrider commented on Whether Changes

    01-07-2012

    Like a rain drop you start small but compared to what.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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